Eyes
The color of my birthstone,
Sagittarius
Tint sometimes varies, shade sometime various
Pools of caramel
Round like parasail’s
Starin’ hypnotized like rides on carousels
Windows to her soul are bronze and goldenrod
Eyes are honest no mirage or some facade
Half closed when she smiles
Matches how she styles
Tears of joy looks like sunset on the Nile
Damn it’s wild
Even in Shades, she amazes
The hue is like maize, a dusty haze with grays
Like adobe clays set ablaze in Santa Fe
Dances like Ballets,
Sun ray bouquets
Like a cinnamon soufflé
Little sprays of beige
It’s hard to paraphrase what her gaze conveys
I could stare at them for days…
The only thing I regret?
She hasn’t used those eyes to look at me yet 
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1969
November 3, 2006
Very nice.
911
November 3, 2006
I might say one of this chits to someone……….*starts copying and paste’n and printing*…..na good though…1
Keli
May 6, 2007
Ok, this is another favorite.
My favorites lines from this Dime Lines:
Half closed when she smiles
Matches how she styles
Tears of joy looks like sunset on the Nile
DivineLavender
May 6, 2007
Windows to the soul….real E Talk.
Curvydva
May 6, 2007
This is incredibly sweet, deep and sincere. I think this is my fav of all your Dime Lines. Goes really nicely with the music too…
valentine
May 6, 2007
Beautiful.
Arianna
May 7, 2007
That was beautiful E…my favorite line was “It’s hard to paraphrase what her gaze conveys”.
Creem
May 7, 2007
that was hot! i happen to be a Sag.
This was my fav line:
could stare at them for days; the only thing I regret?
She hasn’t used those eyes to look at me yet .
Soon come darling, soon come.
BluJewel
May 8, 2007
Aww! that’s a touching one…i’ve had moments like this *sigh*
loved this line too…
“could stare at them for days; the only thing I regret?
She hasn’t used those eyes to look at me yet .”
i digressed to that feeling a time or few when wondering if my dollar will ever come
Eb
March 29, 2008
Awe E… it was so endearing and then went straight melancholy. I love it just the same though.
skoolboi_krush
March 30, 2008
Good work, brother! One day I’ll grow up and be able to write like that.
Mel
March 30, 2008
Loving it.
Mia
March 30, 2008
Very Very Nice!!
wahoo4uva
March 30, 2008
Yea! A new Dime Lines! Been a while. Loved it, as usual. Nice work E.
a.tiara
March 30, 2008
“Windows to her soul are bronze and goldenrod
Eyes are honest no mirage or some facade”
Thats my favorite line. Aww great Dime lines E:-)
The Honorable 'Sass
March 30, 2008
Loving all this Conya Doss you got popping off here this week.
As for the poem?
Greatness. The ending was real shit.
Keep writing man and sharing.
whensorrysnotenough
March 30, 2008
nice.
Pretty Thick Chick
March 31, 2008
You’re the 1 or you are the Prototype. I so *heart* you from a distance!
THE Karrie B.
April 1, 2008
pink looks great on you!
real men wear pink.
i like when u get all poetic and shit. it’s hella cute.
changes my mind about you bein’ a playa, cuz all men (to me) are playas by default.
-karrie b.
harriet
April 2, 2008
Wow, E.
“Dances like Ballets,
Sun ray bouquets
Like a cinnamon soufflé
Little sprays of beige
It’s hard to paraphrase what her gaze conveys”
Just wow. Made me appreciate being a black woman with pretty brown eyes.
)
harriet
April 2, 2008
Wow, E.
“Dances like Ballets,
Sun ray bouquets
Like a cinnamon soufflé
Little sprays of beige
It’s hard to paraphrase what her gaze conveys”
Just wow. Made me appreciate being a black woman with pretty brown eyes.
) Thanks!
harriet
April 2, 2008
Wow, E.
“Dances like ballets
Sun ray bouquets
Like a cinammon souffle
Little sprays of beige
It’s hard to paraphrase what her gaze conveys.”
Just…wow! Makes me feel so blessed to be a black woman with pretty brown eyes! thanks!